Looks good so far!
Yes you could do with some more hides:
-Terracotta pots make for good hides, just lay them on their sides.
or
-Purchase hides from your local aquatic pet store.
Make sure there are no sharp edges which could cause accidents.
If your plants are real, add more! You have a lot of space to create a great Axolotl environment. Also it would be good to get some floating plants which will help minimize the light exposure for your Axolotls, creating good cover.
I've heard good things about Frogbit, Azolla, Elodea.
This article should help:
Axolotl Sanctuary
'Some recommend plants:
Anubias Nana - great plant, virtually indestructible, hardy and low maintenance.
Anubias Isabelle - very tough, taller than the Nana.
Anubias Barteri - just like the Nana, but a bit bigger and with rounder leaves.
Java Fern - one of the toughest aquatic plants you can get - grows anywhere!
Java Moss - grows anywhere as well, can be made into a sort-of "carpet"
Lilaeopsis - this is like grass, you can make a beautiful lawn in your tank with it.
Eleocharis (Hairgrass) - same as with Lilaeopsis tends to be a bit taller though.
Pongol - this is actually Mondo Grass, so it's not a true aquatic but survives (doesn't grow, just survives) for ages submerged, not really recommended.
Congensis - quite striking for a centrepiece plant.
Riccia - Riccia generally needs a lot of light to grow properly, thus only suitable for brighter tanks.
Narrow Chain Sword - another grassy-type thing. Looks pretty, grows happily.'
Also your substrate is quite a thick layer, this can build up harmful anaerobic bacteria in the form of gas pockets under the sand where detritus builds up. If you are going to keep the thick substrate then make sure to keep the surface of your substrate clean.